Because I wanted to...

Ohhhhh sad face :( That's pretty awesome, I felt like I got slapped in the face when those last two lines hit.

Thank you guys! I'm glad you all seem to have got exactly what I was feeling at the time I wrote it, which means I must of got something right ...

Oh my gosh to be 14 again. If only I was as good as writing as you are when I was ohhhh so young ;) I wish the last line ...

Of truth and virtue, Death and lies. This part in particular is my favorite just the way it sounds. The poem itself is so dark, I love it! It really ...

So in your face. love how intense it is for sure. I like the fast pace and beat as well. I hope I can learn to emanate that in my ...

mmmm heartbreak, such a motivator right? This kinda made me wanna cry a little. Just cause as you would put it I don't know and "my heart feels busted" I ...

So you made me feel like I was reading about myself :) I like it. It touched a soft spot for me. I think if you worked on it more ...

I never thanked anyone for helping me with this poem. Thank you all so much! I didn't edit it too much just because it came from a lot emotions and ...

I wish I could find it. Then maybe I'd be free. I wish I could find it. Just one single lead. I wish I could find it. What I want ...

I love art myself, so I enjoy this. The only thing I would change is the fifth line up from the bottom. I'd make it "and some places are even ...

I like the way you write a lot, How the rhythms so clear. but I am left wondering what it is that broke your heart in the first place, I ...

I call for you in the morning light, whispers fill my ears. The shadows cast upon the walls spread my lingering fears. The beast took you again last night... you ...

This was nice, simple and easy to relate to. Every girl has been here at this point, looking at what they long for and seeing it with someone new. Someone ...

Absolutely haunting... I love the strong male image I get from this poem, its very intense. "Do you dare enter my domain? My mind of all minds, The secret of ...

I like how the poem just kind of stops... I love way you described the flirting between the characters and the images you get of young love, One question, were ...